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"instead of a piercing blast, it produced only a raucous squawk"

DOCTOR WHO AND THE INVISIBLE ENEMY
by Terrance Dicks

First published 29 March 1979 (1), between The Armageddon Factor and Destiny of the Daleks (2)

Something’s always confused me about ‘The Invisible Enemy’ or, more precisely, about reactions to it. Lawrence Miles and Tat Wood articulate an oft presented challenge to the logic of its events, suggesting the nucleus’s motives in escaping the Doctor’s mind and becoming macroscopic ‘are questionable’, surely rendering it more rather than less vulnerable (3). I’d always assumed the reason was that the Doctor, inadvertently and without even knowing of their existence, is on the verge of absorbing Leela’s antibodies and nucleus is effectively on the run by whatever means necessary.

    The novelisation makes this reading a bit trickier, at least initially. Unlike on TV, the Doctor takes a blaster off Leela and opens fire on the nucleus (4) before collapsing and muttering about his escape route (5), despite having no chance of making it before expiring and, more starkly, having no new information that I can work out that would make his return to the macroscopic world for a few seconds at all worthwhile anyway. I’d assumed this was a cunning ploy on the Doctor’s part to make the nucleus feel threatened where it was and the lead it to an escape route which would make it vulnerable. However, it later turns out the nucleus’s knowledge of the escape route has nothing to do with the dying Doctor’s words (6), so that’s not what’s going on.

    Let’s assume then that the reasons for the nucleus making itself more vulnerable remain the same as on TV, namely that it is no longer safe within the Doctor’s mind, but that, unlike on TV, this is a state of affairs brought about knowingly and deliberately by the Doctor by going into his mind and shooting at the nucleus. Leela’s antibodies become nothing but a bonus in this scenario, allowing him to survive a second attack later (7). All of which means the novelisation’s even better than the broadcast episodes because not only does everything make sense but the Doctor’s actually active in solving the problems he encounters!

    By this point, you’ve probably noticed I’m working quite hard to defend this one. I definitely remember reading this a long time before I ever saw it, and I remember liking it rather a lot. Now, I can’t suddenly pretend ‘The Invisible Enemy’ is actually a great story, but I do want to offer a bit of a counterweight to the general opinion that this, at a story level, was doomed regardless of its production issues (8) – essentially, I want to try and justify how it was possible for the book to offer such promise…

    Rewatching the broadcast episodes, a couple of surprises do stand out. The first relates to the virus, whose personality feels a lot less accidental in the book, going on ‘a long, ranting speech of self-justification’ (9) just before making its fatal flaw and going macroscopic, still ‘constantly complaining’ (10) once its achieved its seeming dream and pursuing its final goal ‘in a slavering frenzy of impatience’ (11) rather than in any scheming way. It makes sense that its grotesque sense of self-importance should get the better of any reason because it sees itself not as an ambitious microbe but as a god, hence any insult to it is ‘blasphemy’ (12). Crucially, it doesn’t possess those with whom it makes contact, as seems to be the case on TV, but converts them to its cause, Marius, for example, described as having his ‘loyalties […] now devoted to the Purpose’ when infected by the virus (13), with greater fanaticism coming with longer exposure (14).

    This alters the nature of the Doctor’s infection – what he suffers isn’t so much possession as subjugation. And, though Rob Shearman at least may feel the initial contact comes across more comically in the novelisation than on TV (15), I’d argue the overall effect is much more affecting. When the Doctor makes ‘a desperate appeal’ to not kill Leela (16), Baker makes the decision onscreen to play it as rather distant (17), emphasising the concentration necessary to back; the novelisation meanwhile, with its scattering of adjectives, suggests a more plaintive, impotent cry. On a similar note, the Doctor’s eventual order to ‘Kill her’ is far more controlled onscreen (18), in contrast to the feverish tone in the novelisation (19), losing the possibility that it is the Doctor’s mind itself that has become perverted to the cause. Perhaps, with this being the first story to enter production under Graham Williams (20), this was an early sacrifice to the new directive to, according to Shannon Sullivan, ‘tone down the programme’s levels of violence and horror’ (21)..?

    The second surprise comes in the nature of the Doctor and Leela’s relationship. I was a bit disingenuous in my Doctor Who and the Face of Evil blog when I suggested there was no way of misreading Leela’s

rescue of the Doctor in ‘Image of the Fendahl’ – as a kid, I always did

read them as a bit of a couple. However, I don’t think it was ever

because of that scene, nor indeed because of the barely concealed

resentment that apparently seethed between the two actors (22). The

answer, which for some reason comes across more strongly in the

books, lies in how much their interactions resemble screwball

comedy.

    To facilitate this, the Doctor’s become more boorish than at least

Tom Baker’s ever been before, dismissing Leela’s ever-correct

warnings and developing a constant ‘bad temper’ as a character trait (23), plus more of a bore (24) and something of a blundering buffoon (25). Leela, meanwhile, is unconventional (26), joyously at home in a world of adventure (27), quietly competent in areas beyond her expertise, such as piloting the Tardis (28), and hyper-competent in those within it, able to detect the virus even over an intercom (29) and utterly immune to infection from the get-go (30).

    In terms of their relationship, the novelisation reveals the Doctor’s ‘great respect’ for Leela’s abilities (31), if one he not only won’t voice but which seemingly prompts his rudeness to her, Leela’s affection and concern for the Doctor, which leaves her ‘unwilling to leave the Doctor’ even as she wants to flee the sight of the clones (32), and the fact that, despite all this, they can never quite get on, Leela apparently actively trying to engage the Doctor when asking about Titan, something that only causes him to snap at her (33). On top of everything else, there’s clearly a sense of competition between them, Leela’s challenging the Doctor’s plan to kill the virus motivated by the inkling that ‘she'd caught the Doctor out’ (34).

    And she’s right. Doubly so. Not only does this all culminate in the Doctor’s plan going skewiff and him having to adopt Leela’s plan to just blow everything up (35) but also, frankly, the Doctor’s solution – to kill the virus with a specially adapted offshoot of Leela’s antibodies – isn’t morally any superior to just blowing everything up. Rob Shearman gets, understandably, into quite a tangle in the way the story not only resorts to a big explosion but spends most of its last episode pointing up this flaw (36), but it makes perfect sense through the prism of the leads’ relationship – all the Doctor’s cleverness and attempts to take the lead, dismissing the halo that appears around him in the Tardis, leaving Leela behind on Titan, getting Marius to create and shrink clones, developing a serum to kill the swarm, either come to nought or make matters worse and he’s left with nothing but Leela’s simple and effective solution. No wonder the best interplay in the whole story is the very un-Doctor Who exchange: ‘“Shall we try using our intelligence?” “Well, if you think that's a good idea”’

Based on the Popular Television Series, ed. Paul Smith

2 epguides.com/DoctorWho

3 ‘the motives of the nucleus – the swam-leader who wants to be as big as its victims […] – are questionable. […] Aren’t the microbes more vulnerable when they’re visible?’

Lawrence Miles and Tat Wood, About Time 4; p.173

4 ‘“Leela, the blaster! Give it to me!” She threw it, the Doctor caught it and swung round to fire at the rock. Already the black rock was splitting as the Nucleus struggled to escape... Eyes dimming, hand shaking, the Doctor fired at the rock, muttering, “Get out of my brain! Get out of my brain...”’

5 ‘The Doctor struggled to rise. ”The tear duct,” he muttered. “Must get to the tear duct...”’

6 “I made use of your escape route, through the eye.” “Yes, you'd have known about that,' said the Doctor thoughtfully. “Snooping about in my mind...”’

7 ‘A lightning-tentacle flashed between his eyes and the Doctor's—and rebounded on to Marius again. He staggered back. The Doctor felt a sudden surge of hope. He was immune!’ – an attack that doesn’t happen on TV, although the Doctor still deduces he’s developed immunity, though for reasons that significantly murkier

8 To give two examples:

‘one of the weakest stories of the fourth Doctor's era’

David J Howe and Stephen James Walker, Doctor Who: The Television Companion, bbc.co.uk/doctorwho/classic/episodeguide/invisibleenemy/detail.shtml

‘the story is bad’

Elizabeth Sandifer, Tardis Eruditorum, eruditorumpress.com/blog/in-the-year-5000-this-was-cutting-edge-the-invisible-enemy

9 ‘The Nucleus began a long, ranting speech of self-justification’

10 ‘the cumbersome, constantly complaining Nucleus’

11 ‘It was in a slavering frenzy of impatience’

12 ‘Angry at the Doctor's blasphemy, Marius leaned over him, staring hard into his eyes’

13 ‘With the virus in control of his mind, all Marius's loyalties were now devoted to the Purpose’

14 ‘Cruickshank, more infected and more fanatical than the rest, hurtled over the barrier in a desperate leap’

15 ‘It reads like a strange joke in the novelisation, but there is something distinctly sinister in the way the Doctor starts getting the syllables of his companion’s name mixed up’

Toby Hadoke and Robert Shearman, Running Through Corridors 2; p.286

16 ‘he gasped a desperate appeal to the power that had invaded his mind. “Please leave me... please! I can't do it... I can't...”’

17 

18 

19 “Kill her,” muttered the Doctor feverishly. “Kill her!”’

20 ‘the story now called “The Invisible Invader” was once again brought forward to the pole position of Doctor Who's fifteenth recording block’

Shannon Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/doctorwho/serials/4t.html

21 ‘Graham Williams […] was immediately confronted with a directive from Head of Serials Bill Slater to tone down the programme's levels of violence and horror’

Shannon Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/doctorwho/serials/4t.html

22 According to Shannon Sullivan, things would finally start to change in rehearsals for the next story recorded: ‘Rehearsals for Horror Of Fang Rock marked a turning point in the relationship between Tom Baker and Louise Jameson. To date, Baker had been quite dismissive of his costar’

Shannon Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/doctorwho/serials/4v.html

23 ‘“Doctor, I can sense danger,” she whispered. “Rubbish! If there was any danger about, I'd be the first to sense it. I know this brain like the back of my hand. What do you know about brains anyway?” “All right, all right, don't get excited,” said Leela. It was a pity the Doctor's bad temper had been cloned along with the rest of him’

24 ‘“Are you listening, Leela?” “Yes,” said Leela, though she'd hardly heard a word’ AND  ‘She was beginning to get tired of being lectured’

25 Doctor: ‘You stay here’ THEN ‘Safran came closer and stared at the Doctor. “It is of no importance—now that you have arrived.” A jagged, lightning-like tentacle sizzled for a moment between Safran's forehead and the Doctor's, and as suddenly vanished. “I have arrived,” said the Doctor in a slurred, dragging voice’ – all because he left Leela behind. This is a Doctor who makes basic mistakes often

26 ‘She'd never been one to pay much attention to the orders of authority’

27 The old favourite: ‘It didn't take Leela very long to get bored’. Plus the rather telling: ‘Vastly outnumbered, she was enjoying herself enormously’

28 ‘Her knowledge of technical matters was almost nil, but she had seen the Doctor take off in the TARDIS often enough. Moreover, the Doctor had instructed her in basic takeoff and landing procedures, saying she might need the information in some emergency’

29 ‘That voice. It was something evil. It was not a human voice, like the first one’

                                                                            30 ‘a fiery tentacle snaked from the console

                                                                            and played about her head. Leela didn't 

                                                                            even notice it’

                                                                            31 ‘“I am a hunter...” “You're a savage!”

                                                                            "Perhaps—I am not ashamed of what I am. 

                                                                            And I tell you I can smell danger.” The 

                                                                            Doctor looked thoughtfully at her. Although

                                                                            he often teased her about it, he had a great

                                                                            respect for Leela's instinct’

                                                                            32 ‘Leela hovered uneasily by the door, not

                                                                            wanting to stay, yet unwilling to leave the

                                                                            Doctor’

33 ‘“Distress call from Titan. Took a while to reach us.” “Is Titan really interesting?” “What does that matter?” snapped the Doctor. “What's important is that someone needs help.” He began re-programming the TARDIS. Leela sighed. Sometimes it seemed she could never say the right thing’

34 ‘“I thought you didn't like killing?” “I don't.” “Then why are you doing all this?” asked Leela, confident she'd caught the Doctor out for once’

35 ‘“Why don't we just blow up Titan?” she suggested cheerfully. “Nucleus, breeding tanks and all!”’

36 ‘The peculiarity of this episode is not that it betrays its idealism at the end with lots of gun battles and death, it’s that it takes such pains to forefront the moralistic concerns and then laugh at them’

Toby Hadoke and Robert Shearman, Running Through Corridors 2; p.291

Dicksisms

‘the vortex, that mysterious region where space and time are one’
Only twice, despite all the shifts of location: ‘With a wheezing, groaning sound the TARDIS arrived on Titan’ AND ‘the TARDIS door closed and a few minutes later there was a strange, wheezing, groaning sound’ – a few minutes?!? This is when they’re racing to get to Titan before the Nucleus. No wonder they fail

Height Attack

Just the Doctor: 'A very tall man’

Revenge of the Educational Remit

‘Saturn is a giant of a planet, an immense globe of gas seven hundred and fifty times the volume of Earth. Besides its famous 'rings', formed by countless icy particles reflecting the dim sunlight, Saturn is celebrated for the number of its moons. There are ten in all, and the largest, Titan, is the biggest satellite in the solar system. Larger than the planet Mercury, it has its own cloudy atmosphere of hydrogen and methane’

Are You Sitting Comfortably..?

‘It was a gallant attempt, but a very foolish one’

‘“Parsons, nurse, come with me, we must attend to the Doctor!” Other people had plans for the Doctor, too’

Tory Who

‘Leela's uncanny instinct saved her

life. Sensing danger she swung

round—to find K9's blaster covering

her. K9 fired, but she was already

hurling herself through the air in a

flying leap. K9's blaster-bolt missed,

and Leela landed awkwardly. She

twisted her foot on a chunk of

rubble, and pitched forward. Her

head thumped against the wall’ – is

this better or worse? Is Dicks just

correcting the weird nonsense that

happened onscreen? Or must every

female companion twist their ankle

and bang their head?

K9 doesn't exactly shoot Leela in The Invisible Enemy
Leela and the Doctor in Image of the Fendahl

Miscellania

The nucleus: ‘lashing tentacles, the evil gleam of a bulbous eye’; ‘waving antennae, glistening wet red flesh, and a bulbous black eye that. seemed to swivel to and fro’; ‘A long whip-like tentacle’; ‘red and glistening’; ‘blood-red in colour’; ‘a bony glistening body and lashing tentacles. The huge black bulbous eyes swivelled malevolently’

Perhaps an explanation for the behaviour of the clones: ‘Too late the Doctor remembered that he was only a carbon copy with a strictly limited life’

A lovely bit: ‘This was the paradox of space travel. You selected the brightest, the most determined from thousands of candidates and trained them to a peak of mental and physical skill. Then you surrounded them with computer technology so that only in some million-to-one emergency would their skills ever be needed’

‘The Doctor felt in his capacious pockets and found something that looked like a whistle, put it to his lips and blew hard. Unfortunately it proved to be some kind of duck lure—instead of a piercing blast, it produced only a raucous squawk. The Doctor abandoned the whistle and called loudly, “Anyone home?”’ – does Dicks not like the frippery of him deliberately employing a duck lure?

‘Embedded in the centre of the building was an enormous glowing red cross, symbol of the healer since the earliest days of Man’ – I mean, first up the earliest days of man were about 3 million years ago; the Red Cross, as understood today, came into existence in the late 19th century and doesn’t seem to have been drawing on any preceding connotations (indeed, the Red Cresent quickly followed because what connotations there were happened to be negative). Secondly, according to the Red Cross’s own website (redcross.org.uk/about-us/what-we-do/protecting-people-in-armed-conflict/the-emblem), the ‘emblem is not a first aid or medical sign’ but a signifier of ‘neutrality and protection’

‘The shuttle sped on. As soon as it arrived on Titan, mankind would be doomed...’ – It does reach Titan…

‘Professor Marius, a stocky Germanic figure’ – how can you have a Germanic figure?

K9 has ‘a computer display screen for eyes’ – he does?

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