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"real wine in a real china cup! Few men on Earth enjoyed such luxury in these times"

DOCTOR WHO AND THE DAY OF THE DALEKS
by Terrance Dicks

First published 27 March 1974 (1), between The Monster of Peladon Parts One and Two (2)

Height Attack

‘A huge figure loomed in the doorway […] it was Sergeant Benton’ - I'd never realised he was so big.

And of course the Ogrons are ‘almost seven feet in height’

The joy of Dicks is pace. Here’s the rebels: Boaz is ‘fiercely brave, but too highly strung’, Shura is ‘full of a fiery idealism’, Anat has ‘Fierce courage […] cunning and caution’ and all are ‘eager’ (3). They might not be the most complete characters you’ve ever encountered, but they’re clearly differentiated from each other and the reader can map possible behaviour onto those traits. Here’s food in the future: ‘coarse bread, tough meat and a mish-mash of strange vegetables’ and a comment that ‘Few people eat so luxuriously’ (4). You might not get any actual detail, but there’s such a weight to food so clearly signified as from a time of hardship, especially when rationing is just over 20 years past, being framed as a luxury.

    What makes Doctor Who and the Day of the Daleks a bit special is the manner in which Dicks also picks up Hulke’s baton of underlying theme-weavery and improves the televised story whilst in no way compromising the page-turning prose style. As with Doctor Who and the Doomsday Weapon, the point is defining humanity. Here, it is qualities such as ‘courage’, ‘persistence and cunning’ (5), as personified by the rebels. There is even the hint, following on from Hulke, that what they fight for can never die even as the individuals do: ‘that handful seemed immortal’. This is contrasted with what the Daleks have brought to the Earth: hopelessness, a sense that the struggle is ‘ultimately all for nothing’. The Doctor, as in the previous novelisation, is allied with the side of hope, it not being in his ‘nature to give up for very long’ (6), while the Controller represents the crushed humanity of the future, hopelessly reflecting that resistance is ‘ultimately all for nothing’.

​    But the Controller’s position shifts through the course of the story. To begin with he is simply the contrasting reflection of the rebels, as when he is seen ‘Unconsciously copying the tactics of Moni the night before’ (7), but there are hints that he is not wholly settled psychologically on the Daleks’ Earth, feeling ‘a twinge of unease at the thought of those of his fellow humans who were less fortunate’ (8). A spark of hope seems to ignite in him when he witnesses for the first time fear in the Daleks (9) and he immediately starts behaving differently, exploiting ambiguities in his orders when ‘anxious to meet the man who could actually produce fear in the Daleks’ (10), and feeling a new pricking to his conscience (11). His close brush with death provides his final transformation, allowing him to dare dream of ‘freedom’ (12), losing ‘the cowed slump of slavery’ (13) and facing death with ‘no attempt to escape’ (14).

    This is the innovation Dicks brings to Hulke’s storytelling in the last two books. Where Hulke offered a firm ethical stance, his plots have only allowed it to function as an aid to those striving for a better way, whether Morka, who already had the capacity to feel sympathy for other species, or the colonists, who had already turned their backs on the corporate Earth of the future. Dicks, however, building on something quite low in the mix in Louis Marks’s scripts, takes a similar ethical stance and shows it transform an antagonist because it is actually better than the alternative.

​    Emboldened, Dicks then turns his sights on David Whitaker, rewriting the theory of time outlined in Doctor Who and the Crusaders. On a human scale, time remains an inescapable force bending incidents to history’s will, as when it conspires to get Shura in position to blow up Austerly House (15), but ‘the Daleks managed to pervert the course of history’ and the Doctor is ‘able to intervene and put history back on its proper tracks’ (16). This, much like the Controller’s emotional journey, isn’t necessarily a battle Dicks has chosen – he is after all novelising someone else’s story – but, as with the Controller’s journey, he’s chosen to play the emphasis differently to the episodes. Yes, Marks’s script meant history had to be malleable, but it’s Dicks who has suggested that humans are stuck on the path of history, harking back to Whitaker’s model, and so highlight the Daleks’ and the Doctor’s ability to shape it.

    Between them then, Dicks and Hulke have set out the stall for the Target range. They’ve taken the strengths of the Frederick Muller publications, taken on their weaknesses and, whilst I might be sad at the loss of the more literary approach, established an action-adventure prose style that generates a more consistent tone than managed even between the two Whitaker novels.

Tory Who

‘Ah, yes. A most good-humoured wine, this. A touch of the sardonic perhaps, but not cynical. A truly civilised little wine, one after my own heart’

‘Ever wondered how the fox feels, Jo?’

Leftie Who

‘you can always be sure of one thing with politicians whatever their political ideas: they always keep a well-stocked larder’

Dicksisms

‘the police box began to give out the most agonising groaning sound’

‘Jo looked at him impatiently. “Do stop chuntering on, Doctor”’ – is that what ‘chuntering' means??

Name-checks for the Sterling brand of sub-machine gun – three: ‘The UNIT sentry swung round, his Sterling sub-machine gun at the ready’, ‘As they ran they unslung their Sterling sub-machine guns’ and ‘the Brigadier snatched up his Sterling from the seat beside him and emptied the full clip of bullets into the Ogron’. Is Dicks being sponsored? And are 8-year-olds the core market for sub-machine guns anyway?

Good Dicks: ‘The enormous dormitory was packed with sleeping forms, drugged into total exhaustion by hours of brutal physical toil’

Bad Dicks: 'Brisk and to the point as always, thought Moni approvingly' (of Anat). The mildness of ‘approvingly’ from such a desperate man in such a desperate situation in such a desperate world is a shuddering mismatch of tone.

Ugly Dicks: Contrast the intros to the Doctor and Jo: 'a tall, lean man' and 'A very small, very pretty girl' – not only is ‘pretty’ a substitute for the actually informative ‘lean’ (maybe in Dicks’s world you don’t get plumper women but you do get unattractive ones) but the use of 'very' makes the description of Jo simply comparative (as if placing her on a sliding scale of women) in a way the description of the Doctor doesn’t.

1 http://tardis.wikia.com/wiki/Doctor_Who_and_the_Day_of_the_Daleks

2 http://epguides.com/DoctorWho

3 ‘Moni looked round at the three eager faces. Boaz, dark, scowling and intense; fiercely brave, but too highly strung, too ready to act without thinking. Shura, the youngest, full of a fiery idealism. Finally, he looked at the girl, Anat. Slim, dark and wiry with close-cropped hair. Anat was still beautiful, in spite of the rough work clothes she was wearing. Here was the real leader, Moni thought. Fierce courage, a passionate hatred of the enemy, and the cunning and caution that made her wait until the best moment to strike’

4 Jo’s verdict on her meal (‘it hadn’t been all that hot... coarse bread, tough meat and a mish-mash of strange vegetables’) is nicely balanced by the Controller’s boast that ‘Few people eat so luxuriously these days’ but also rather undermined by the mention that ‘Jo Grant pushed her plate away with a sigh of pleasure’. Maybe it’s a comment on British food in the 70s?

5 ‘Never more than a pitiful handful of them. Yet in a way, that handful seemed immortal. As soon as one group of resistance fighters was tracked down another sprang up. With their pitifully tiny resources, their cellar hide-outs and their home-made weapons they took on all the might of the Dalek technology. Naturally, the rebels could never win. Yet in a way it seemed they could never lose. The Controller was forced almost to admire his fellow humans. They were wrong, of course. Hopelessly misguided. But such courage! Such persistence and cunning in the face of impossible odds. With qualities like these it was easy to see why the race of Man had once been a great one. The Controller sighed again. But it was ultimately all for nothing. Eventually the rebels would lose the unequal fight. They would suffer the fate of everyone who opposed the Daleks. They would be exterminated’

6 ‘It wasn’t in the Doctor’s nature to give up for very long’

7 ‘Unconsciously copying the tactics of Moni the night before’ – both get cooperation from the Ogrons by threatening the anger of the Daleks. It does show, very soon after all the stuff about wine, china cups and real cloth, that the situation is the same for all regardless.

8 ‘He repressed a twinge of unease at the thought of those of his fellow humans who were less fortunate’

9 ‘there was something different about those voices. They held some quality the Controller had never heard before […] The quality was fear. For the first time in the Controller’s experience of them the Daleks were actually afraid’

10 ‘“He must be captured alive.” The Controller himself gave that final order. He knew the Daleks would probably prefer the Doctor to be killed on sight. But he was anxious to meet the man who could actually produce fear in the Daleks’

11 ‘Now the Daleks could take over. They’d been right all along... it was a waste of time being considerate to such criminals. With thoughts like these the Controller tried to drown the memory of the Doctor’s accusing voice. But it was no good. In his heart he knew that everything the Doctor had said was true’

12 ‘In an agonised voice the Controller said, “If only I could be sure...” […] “You saved my life,” said the Controller slowly. “You could have let them kill me. And now you offer freedom”’

13 ‘the Controller of Earth Sector One stood before the Dalek High Council. Somehow he seemed a different man. His shoulders had lost the cowed slump of slavery, and he was free at last from fear, since he had nothing now to lose’

14 ‘Zeno made a determined grab for the Controller. To his surprise the Controller was standing quite still: he made no attempt to escape’

15 ‘Shura’s incredible luck had served him well again. It was almost as though he was meant to succeed... as though fate was co-operating with him’

16 ‘“Somehow the Daleks managed to pervert the course of history so they could conquer the Earth. The guerrillas tried to change things back, but because they were a part of history, their intervention just repeated the pattern. I was able to intervene and put history back on its proper tracks.” “I know,’ said Jo impatiently, ‘because you’re a Time Lord”’ – I like the ‘impatiently’. It suggests the Doctor never shuts up about his aristocratic background

Miscellania

Another lovely illustration to open, this time a map of the area around Austerly House

'real wine in a real china cup' –  I can’t be sure and neither, I would guess, could many eight-year-olds. Do you drink wine from china? Is this supposed to make the Controller look foolish or posh?

‘the Controller wondered if the Ogron was telling the truth. The creatures were so savage that it was difficult to persuade them to take prisoners. Their instinct was to kill anyone they got their hands on’ – this makes them sound much more dangerous than they ever appeared on TV.

‘He was being turned away with the usual propaganda’ – Does this mean the Daleks don’t really believe everything they say? Is it all a front? And for their own benefit?

‘The Daleks were becoming frightened, he thought. Fear could have only one result—to make them even more ruthless than before. And that meant harshness and oppression for Earth’ – I like the idea that the Daleks are instinctively only moderately ruthless.

‘The Daleks began to talk amongst themselves in grating metallic voices. It was not so much a conference: since all Daleks think alike it was more a chorus of agreement’ – I guess it is for their own benefit. I like the idea that the only reason Daleks ever talk to each other is to confirm their own prejudices.

The first hint that the Daleks are actually motivated by economic concerns: ‘could obviously have been carried out entirely by machines. Probably the Daleks found it simpler and cheaper to wear out human beings instead’ - is Dicks taking up Hulke's arms against the evil sea of capitalism?

Most convolutedly pointless death?: ‘Boaz grabbed the ball of plastic explosive dropped by Joan. He ran straight at the Dalek’, further undermined by: ‘it doesn’t always go off when you throw it. He wasn’t taking any chances’ - If it’s ‘designed to explode on contact’, why are the chances improved to certainty by not throwing it?

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