A quest through the Dr Who novelisations
"The excellent ham of Doctor Who is more than a little off"
1974 Times Literary Supplement review of Doctor Who and the Crusaders (quoted from David J Howe's The Target Book)
"crush the arrogant ones for ever"
FULL CIRCLE
by Andrew Smith
First published 16 September 1982 (1), between Time-Flight and Arc of Infinity (2)
Alzarius is a much more richly painted place in prose, a ‘fog planet’, possibly ‘home of […] unimaginable horrors’ made all the more intimidating by the fact that’s actually a question not a statement and no one knows quite ‘how many’ horrors may live there (3). The few who ‘ever dared’ visit (4), such as ‘Governmental and academic survey teams’ (5), were never ‘seen or heard of again’ (6), their vessels seen to be ‘empty, lifeless’ and decayed from space (7) and even unmanned landers were ‘destroyed by whatever lurked under cover of the mists’ (8). Here is a planet not only hostile to all life but even to any useful observation. The prologue ends with an ominous poem, later detailed to be known by the inhabitants of the starliner, which describes ‘The planet’ itself as ‘unleashing terror’ and ‘Bringing death’ (9). This will later prove truer in terms of how the novelisation presents the Marshmen than the poem’s author First Decider Yanek Pitrus presumably knew.
The prologue also describes the starliner’s crash-landing and subsequent week (10), and the sense of dread that shrouds Alzarius is merely heightened. There’s something of the Hinchcliffe about the wholesale employment off horror tropes like those who venture beyond the ship never returning (11), their last contact nothing but a ‘distress call’ (12). When the Marshmen finally come to the starliner, the reader is privy to few details – they appear ‘from nowhere’, ‘lumbering’ towards their target (13) and, when the killing begins, the time-honoured TV Who tradition, admittedly one not restricted to the Hammereque Hinchcliffe years, of only detailing the attackers’ extremities (14) rears its head.
Once the Marshmen, later in the story, make a full appearance, Smith uses his freedom from the restrictions of 1980 BBC TV to do more than recreate the tics of 1970s Who. Though there’s still plenty of hands dragging people underwater (15), the Marshmen also demonstrate a ‘bestial ferocity’ (16) not clear onscreen, for example when Yenik is by the creatures ‘leaping up out of the water around him, screaming, landing on him and dragging him under’ (17). The marshfruit spiders are similarly more the-stuff-of-nightmares: Smith takes the opportunity to add the tactile horror of their ‘mossy-soft body pressed against [Romana’s] cheek (18) to the visuals; provides shock appearances, as when one crawls from K9’s severed neck onto the Doctor’s hand (19); and, mirroring Yenik’s being pulled into the marsh under the weight of three Marshmen, offers the image of Romana’s prone body disappearing under ‘an undulating mass of black animosity’ (18).
Smith also uses the novelisation to double down on his and Bidmead’s theme, as spelt out by Shannon Sullivan, of ‘evolution’ (21) or, more precisely, adaptation to environment. The emergence of the Marshmen from the marsh is likened to ‘beetles coming out of pupation’, with them needing ‘time to acclimatise themselves, adjusting their physiology to fit into this new, gaseous environment’ (22), and there’s a later glimpse of them doing similar when they encounter the starliner, their feet flattening due to the smooth floors (23). A similar process is used to explain the Marshchild’s encounter with Dexeter, ‘developing […] animal strength’ (24) when it needs to free itself from its bonds.
That last bit kind of highlights how bizarre the presentation of evolution is in Full Circle, what with the way the creatures seem to adapt not only to environment but to specific situations. John Toon, in the Black Archive that tackles this story, really goes to town on this absurdity, stating Jack Graham’s stance that that the Marshmen adapt to ‘the ecological niche of the Starliner’ (25) is ‘utterly baseless’ as they’re ‘already of a size and shape to live comfortably in the Starliner’ (26). The foot-flattening suggests Andrew Smith might not share John Toon’s view.
[To be fair, I’m also flummoxed by the details of the Marshmen in this novelisation. I’d always assumed that the spiders hatch from the marshfruit then enter the nearby marsh and sort of pupate into the Marshmen. I’d never really thought about it before but the presence of the Marshchild makes this clearly nonsense and actually, as the novelisation makes all the clearer by mentioning the Marshmen previously living ‘under the marsh’, the Marshmen have been merrily pottering about underwater, living their lives, before mistfall for some reason draws them up out of the depths. How they appear is exactly as they were in the liquid environment, hence at least one of them being a child. Quite what this means the role of the spiders is is beyond me.]
The novelisation hints at several ways the starliner might have caused the Marshmen to adapt the way they have. The first is the simplest, and the one that I think John Toon is actually specifically dismissing, which is that the ‘sterile environment of the starliner’ (27), its isolation from the natural world of Alzarius, transforms the Marshmen into the things for which it has been designed. There’s even one strikingly bland sentence that I think serves to suggest this affects their manner as well as their physiognomy – ‘The three great men walked purposefully along the gleamingly immaculate starliner passageway’ (28); the almost indescribable blandness of the ‘three great men’ of Alzarius perfectly matches the almost indescribable blandness of ‘the gleamingly immaculate’ starliner.
In the novelisation, however, and not just because John Toon finds the idea baseless, this can’t be enough. Survey teams have come to the planet before, died and left space vessels lying about for any old Marshman to adapt to. They’ve simply been ignored to the point of decay. The starliner is described as both a ‘colony-class ship’ (29), exactly as on TV, as a ‘commercial pleasure-liner’ (30), with the presence on board in the prologue of ‘a lawyer’ (31) suggesting the latter is at least its current use. It is also, judging by its ‘staggeringly large nose’ (32), ‘large [..] boarding door’ (33) and ‘Large emergency escape portals’ (34), quite large, like an environment to itself designed to be lived in for longer periods of time.
Even that, though, doesn’t have to be the whole of what’s caused the Marshmen’s transformation. There’s also the hint the ship itself has forced the transformation through its computer – the three Deciders are said to each have ‘a bio-link with the computer’ which monitors their ‘heart beat [sic], respiration and other vital functions’ (35), which might mean they had to become something the computer could recognise in order to take over the starliner. And then there are the manuals about which they’re so obsessed. John Toon describes this as the ‘genetic code’ (36) left behind by the starliner’s earlier inhabitants – it is at least part of the base for the Marshmen’s metamorphosis once aboard. In fact as society build from obeisance to a computer and some technical manuals could be reason equal to the sterility of life aboard the starliner for the staggeringly bland sentence quoted in the paragraph two above – both people and environment are so bland because both reflect the sterility of their guiding influence.
Finally, there’s the manner in which the Alzarians have honed life aboard the starliner. Though the computer has seemingly dictated the choice of three leaders, the crew in the prologue feature a commander, sub-commander and pilot (37) rather than Deciders. There’s also no evidence of an Elite or Norms in the prologue. It seems reasonable then that the whole ‘classification of citizens at birth’ by ‘Encephalographic scans’ which dictate the education accessible to different strata of the population (38) is an Alzarian rather than a Terradonian invention, one by which they have ossified their development, which might explain just as well as the sterility of life aboard the starliner or the centrality of a computer and some technical manuals to their culture the staggeringly bland sentence &c, &c.
Furthermore, the purpose of classification, possibly according to the omniscient narrator, more likely from the perspective of the outlers, is stated as making ‘things identifiable, […] tangible and thus less frightening’ (39), with the implication that, without it, more people would reject the rule of the Deciders. Similar, therefore, are the legends around mistfall, explicitly perpetuated ‘to maintain control’ (40) and labelled by the Doctor as ‘Government by myth-management’ (41). John Toon likens the situation to that of ‘the pigs in George Orwell’s Animal Farm’ (42), not just corrupted by their newfound trappings but also destined to do nothing more than become what they’ve replaced. Full Circle presents history as a repeating cycle.
There’s a memorable moment when Keara, attacked by the Marshmen, ‘almost exactly [mimics] the Marshchild when faced with Omril and the other citizens earlier’ (43), and it’s tempting to read this as a comment on how little the Alzarians have changed. However, while watching that earlier attack, the Doctor is ‘reminded of the time he […] witnessed the murder of a 'witch' in England on seventeenth-century Earth’ (44). That could be read as an even more thorough reiteration of the cycle of history, of how nothing ever changes anywhere throughout all of history but, what with this not even taking place in the same universe, it seems likely this is meant more as a commentary on the universality of becoming the victim of a mob.
The novelisation, in fact, hints that, though it’s taken four thousand generations (45), the starliner’s society might be breaking the cycle even under its own steam. Varsh’s group of outlers are the first ‘to have survived for so long’ (46), suggesting the Alzarians, having adapted so fully to life aboard the starliner, are becoming more versatile. Similar is the oddly ‘legendary’ nature of Decider Draith’s ‘fitness’ (47) while he chases Adric through the forest. Is he, like the outlers, better adapted to life beyond the ship than his predecessors? Was his, at least to Decider Nefred’s eyes, overly close connection with the scientist Dexeter also a sign he was hoping to take Alzarian society beyond the confines they had stuck within for so many generations?
How significant any of this might be is massively complicated by another addition Smith makes. After the Marshmen have been expelled from the starliner, it becomes suddenly apparent that there’s an awful lot more going on in their heads than had been apparent both onscreen and up to that point in the novelisation. Not only are they all ‘joined in mental empathy’ (45), explaining how they act in concert, but they’re pursuing a ‘philosophy’ (46), to maintain the planet’s ‘purity from off-world corruption’ (47). It’s all a bit BNP and great replacement theory – they think of themselves as ‘the real people of Alzarius’ and those in the starliner as ‘non-people’ (48), infected by off-world ‘corruption’ (49), ‘Like, but unlike’, who’ll ‘spread across Alzarius’ and make it foreign (50).
In this light, the novelisation’s sympathies feel worryingly as if they lie with the Marshmen. When Romana joined the big ‘mindshare’, she ‘had understood’ the ‘cause’, judging those who pursued it ‘not evil’ and ‘not monsters’ (51). There’d be good reason to doubt that verdict – the information comes via the Marshleader and Romana was clearly under substantial influence at the time – but her feeling at the end that she’s forgotten something important (52), something that ‘she should explain […] to her friends’ [italics mine], suggests she truly did, and even in her right mind would, sympathise. On top of this, there’s the Marshleader’s regret that ‘maintaining […] beauty always’ requires ‘the taking of lives’ (53). Admittedly, its climax in the hollow-sounding lament ‘It is so very sad’ suggests a degree of insincerity. However, it’s reminiscent of the Marshchild’s earlier ‘fighting the animal […] inside it’ (54) after it grew stronger to free itself and save its life. As with the child, the novelisation is clarifying that the Marshmen don’t ‘want to act this way’ but are forced to by the threat they face. All those attacks, all that violence and killing, it’s all the fault of those non-people who didn’t start it.
Before deciding that’s all Full Circle has to say, whether Andrew Smith intended it or not, there’s a little hope. Rather than view all this as a sorry excuse for the Marshmen’s actions, it’s just possible to read their actions as involuntary. The Marshchild only goes feral when trapped and at specific threat of death – and doesn’t do so when attacked by a mob in a corridor – and it only seems to be exercising its own will when it tries to calm down, an aim it fails to achieve; maybe all the Marshmen suffer a similar compulsion? Maybe, whatever goes through their heads, they have no choice but to act as they do and their ‘philosophy’ is just post-rationalising behaviour they could not control? Maybe Romana’s glimpsed understanding was in fact that the Marshmen are powerless but to attack?
John Toon, who I’ve been very unfair to so far, offers the option of a ‘Gaian’ reading (55) backed up by the serial’s working title and an interview with Smith himself. This would make the Marshmen ‘antibodies’ (56) who are nothing more than a ‘tool’ used and orchestrated by the planet (57). It allows a less sinister reading of all the talk of ‘corruption’ and ‘purity’ and fits perfectly with their thoughts of serving the planet because ‘all should be nature’. It also explains why the Marshmen seeming only emerge on ‘this continent of Alzarius’ (58) – that’s where the infection is so that’s the only part of the planet that needs activate any antibodies.
This all feels a long way now from the cycles of history the title Full Circle points toward, but, according to Based on the Popular Television Serial, Smith had a plan for that in a John Nathan-Turner-vetoed epilogue (59) – the starliner would eventually return to Alzarius. Would that have suggested, however far the Alzarians travel, they cannot escape their origins? Would it have suggested, however much the Marshmen fight corruption, they will always eventually be subsumed? Either’s pretty bleak. Besides which, I suspect the distinction’s meaningless. John Toon’s right to label this Animal Farm – the details of exactly what’s going on don’t really matter so much as the fact that every seeming conclusion ‘is doomed to’ lead back to ‘more of the same’ (60).
Except possibly one. The book ends with Adric hiding in the Tardis until the possibility of being returned to the starliner seems well and truly impossible (61). For someone who’s spent the whole story trying to find a freer life – he’s introduced trying to escape the starliner by joining his brother Varsh’s outlers – this seems to be the one little triumph. As Romana puts it, Adric can look forward to a life of ‘not just freedom’ but ‘adventure’, ‘wonderment’ and ‘ultimately, a new and deeper wisdom’ (62).
But Smith undermines that little ray of sunshine too. Romana’s reflections on life with the Doctor are spurred by her recall to Gallifrey, a summons that apparently cannot be ignored. Having served her apprenticeship with the Doctor, as Doctor Who and Warriors’ Gate put it, or done her duty then served her time, as it’s put here (63), she’s now doomed to ‘never again be able to experience the freedom she had so much enjoyed’ (64). Of course, Target readers already know she found a way to cheat that fate, by leaving behind the life she loved and her home universe. Mind you, as Target readers also already know, Adric’ll be leaving his universe soon enough so maybe the parallel being drawn is that he will escape the cycle just as Romana will.
Except, and I promise this is my very last paragraph, that glimmer of light also gets undermined. As he and Romana discuss the inevitability of obeying Gallifrey’s recall, the Doctor reflects that ‘His days as a fugitive from the Time Lords were long behind him now’, that he lost his fight for freedom (65). There’s no way I can see for this to relate directly with Adric’s future, and it can’t erase Romana’s positive feelings about life on the Tardis, but it does cast a shadow. Even the Doctor’s life on board the Tardis is lived on a leash, presumably since his pat caught up with him at the end of Doctor Who and the War Games. Like Varsh’s outlers, who ran back to the starliner when mistfall came, Adric’s newfound freedom is painted from all sides as destined to end. Of course, Varsh found a different, even more doom-laden end to that problem (66)…
Size Attack
The Tardis has ‘huge entrance doors’. The starliner, meanwhile, is described as having a ‘massive structure’ and being a ‘great space vessel’ all in one sentence. It has ‘ion-drive cells housed in […] massive protective force casings’, at least one ‘massive boarding door’ and, when it comes to the Great Book Room, ‘a massive monitor screen’ and more ‘massive doors’.
Aside from that, it’s all very restrained for a story featuring ‘giants’.
1. ed. Paul Mc Smith, Based on the Popular BBC Television Serial (fourth edition, July 2021)
2. epguides.com/DoctorWho/
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3. ‘Alzarius itself - the fog planet, home of how many unimaginable horrors? No one knew because no one had ever lived to describe them’
4. ‘Few people ever dared venture to Alzarius’
5. ‘Governmental and academic survey teams had at one time been despatched to Alzarius with great regularity’
6. ‘not one of those groups had ever been seen or heard of again’
7. ‘Unmanned satellites sent back pictures of their empty, lifeless space vessels sitting on the planet's surface, untended, in the process of decay’
8. ‘Any satellites sent in to land on Alzarius during the fog cycles had also been destroyed by whatever lurked under cover of the mists’
9. ‘When Mistfall comes/ The planet that has slept/ Awakes, unleashing terror/ Bringing death if you forget’
10. ‘At nightfall on their seventh day on Alzarius, he was called urgently to the ship's boarding area, where two men had been posted to watch for movement outside the vessel’
11. ‘On the second day, an exploration team consisting of five volunteers was sent out. None of the five returned’
12. ‘The last contact with them was a radio distress call saying they were being attacked’
13. ‘They appeared from nowhere, snarling and screaming, tall and hideous, dozens of them lumbering clumsily up the ramp’
14. ‘Fenrik was the first to die, felled by a blow from a scaly, clawed hand’
15. eg. ‘The hand pulled and he screamed as he fell back under the surface of the water’
16. ‘There was a bestial ferocity in their actions, and yet a certain degree of co-ordination, their blows timed to inflict the optimum force on the TARDIS doors’
17. ‘Not one, but three of them, leaping up out of the water around him, screaming, landing on him and dragging him under’
18. ‘Romana felt its eight legs gripping her face, felt its mossy-soft body pressed against her cheek, felt the bite’
19. ‘a spider emerged from the neck aperture, crawling out onto his hand. For an instant the Doctor knew total fear’
20. ‘The spiders scuttled relentlessly towards her, clambering onto her body, until they covered her entirely, an undulating mass of black animosity’
21. ‘Bidmead wanted to give Doctor Who a much stronger scientific underpinning, and so he and Smith decided to make evolution an underlying theme of the narrative’
Shannon Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/drwho/serials/5r.html
22. ‘The behaviour of the Marshmen was similar to that of beetles coming out of pupation. They needed time to acclimatise themselves, adjusting their physiology to fit into this new, gaseous environment as opposed to the one they had experienced under the marsh’
23. ‘The soles have flattened to allow better mobility over smooth terrain. When they emerged from the marshlands their feet had claws which enabled them to keep a firm grip on the marshbed’
24. ‘The Marshchild knew what Dexeter intended to do to it, and in order to survive was developing the animal strength in itself that would enable it to break free and destroy its assailant, to destroy Dexeter’
25. Jack Graham, 'Things Fall Apart', Eruditorum Press, eruditorumpress.com/blog/things-fall-apart
26. ‘It’s enough of a stretch that an earlier line of Marshmen has somehow evolved into the exact likeness of the | Terradonians – one currently popular fan theory suggests that they did so simply in order to fit into the ecological niche of the Starliner, but this is utterly baseless. They’re under no pressure to do so – the Marshmen we see are already of a size and shape to live comfortably in the Starliner’
John Toon, The Black Archive #15 – Full Circle; pp.58-9
27. Adric: ‘Anything was better than spending the rest of his life in the predictable, sterile environment of the starliner, he told himself, unconsciously echoing Romana's sentiments towards Gallifrey’
28. ‘The three great men walked purposefully along the gleamingly immaculate starliner passageway’
29. ‘This is a colony-class ship. We could programme it to find a place’
30. ‘much of its design appeared to be of a decorative rather than functional nature, betraying its purpose as a commercial pleasure-liner’
31. ‘He recalled that Selman was - or had been on Terradon - a lawyer. Fenrik hated lawyers’
32. ‘the staggeringly large nose of the craft’
33. ‘the large metal panel that was the boarding door’
34. ‘Large emergency escape portals were spaced along one wall at intervals of some six hundred yards or so’
35. ‘All three Deciders had a bio-link with the computer, part of the machine's programming to monitor the well-being of the community's three most important men. As long as they lived, heart beat [sic], respiration and other vital functions were constantly relayed into the computer’
36. Starliner: ‘The genetic code that it carries – the instruction manuals in the Great Book Room’
John Toon, The Black Archive #15 – Full Circle; p.37
37. ‘ashen-faced Commander Yakob Lorenzil’, ‘Sub-Commander Damyen Fenrik’ and a ‘dead Chief Pilot’
38. ‘no one questioned the classification of citizens at birth. Encephalographic scans dictated whether a person should be designated a Norm - to receive only a minimal education - or an Elite - to receive superior education’
39. ‘They were called Outlers because in the starliner community neat classifications were always desirable. Classifications made things identifiable, made them tangible and thus less frightening’
40. Draith: ‘if the citizens knew what I know from the System Files about Mistfall... we would never be able to maintain control over them’
41. ‘Government by myth-management, eh?’
42. ‘Like the pigs in George Orwell’s Animal Farm (1945), once they’ve seized the trappings of power from the intruders, they begin to lose their own identity and take on that of their opponents’
John Toon, The Black Archive #15 – Full Circle; p.64
43. ‘Keara screamed, flinching, arms raised pathetically over her face as the Marshmen advanced. Had the Doctor observed her, he might have considered the irony in that her stance almost exactly mimicked that of the Marshchild when faced with Omril and the other citizens earlier’ – bit of mirroring
44. ‘The Doctor was reminded of the time he had witnessed the murder of a 'witch' in England on seventeenth-century Earth - a young girl, innocent, unaware of the atrocities people could perpetrate under the influence of an inbred fear. He had been too late on that occasion’ – why inbred? Is that a comment on 17th-century communities?
45. ‘“Forty generations?” Romana queried, straightening from the microscope. “More like four thousand, I'd say”’
46. ‘They had not been the first to leave the starliner - but they were the first ones to have done so and to have survived for so long’
47. ‘The old man was moving very quickly - his fitness was legendary’
44. ‘Draith and Dexeter had been close friends for a long time. Had Draith disclosed more than he should have done to this man? Dexeter was in essence a good man, but in Nefred's opinion over-eager, a scientific zealot’
45. ‘The Marshmen lined the banks of the marshlands, an army of them, numbering in their hundreds, joined in mental empathy’
46. ‘On Alzarius, all should be nature. This was the philosophy of the people of the marsh’
47. ‘They existed to serve and to protect nature on this planet. They were the guardians of Alzarius, their lives dedicated to maintaining its purity from off-world corruption’
48. ‘The non-people of the metal city had won this battle, but there would be others, and the people of the marshlands, the real people of Alzarius, would be triumphant and crush the arrogant ones for ever’
49. ‘The non-people, they who had once been guardians themselves, had discarded this philosophy and had allowed the corruption of off-world to infect them’
50. ‘The people of the marsh were frightened. They were aware of the threat posed by the non-people. Like, but unlike. Unchecked, one day to spread across Alzarius and smother the planet with their foul off-world technology’
51. ‘recalling the mindshare with the off-world female. Her mind had understood their cause. The people of the marsh were not evil. They were not monsters, in the pursuit of destruction for its own sake’
52. ‘Romana frowned. A voice inside her seemed to be telling her that there was more to the Marshmen's cause than this, that she should explain this to her friends, but the voice was weak, a memory, no more. She decided to let it pass’
53. ‘why does the maintaining of beauty always have to require the taking of lives? It is so very sad’
54. ‘It's fighting the animal, it's fighting this new thing inside it. It doesn't want to act this way’
55. ‘the very Gaian concept of a ‘living planet’ was central to the story right from the start, as reflected in his [Andrew Smith’s] original title, ‘The Planet That Slept’’
John Toon, The Black Archive #15 – Full Circle; p.44
56. ‘Perhaps we should think of the original Terradonians as microbial invaders in the body of the living planet Alzarius. The Marshmen killed them – acting as antibodies? – but were unable to remove the foreign body of the Starliner and were themselves subverted by | it’
John Toon, The Black Archive #15 – Full Circle; pp.46-7
57. ‘It’s as if the planet Alzarius uses the Marshmen as its tool and orchestrates them through the medium of the psychochemical spider venom’
John Toon, The Black Archive #15 – Full Circle; p.45
58. ‘They numbered in their hundreds, originating from marshes all over this continent of Alzarius’
59. ‘The book originally had an epilogue in which the Starliner ended up back on Alzarius, but producer John Nathan-Turner asked for it to be removed’
ed. Paul Mc Smith, Based on the Popular BBC Television Serial; p.167
60. ‘Even their eventual overthrow, which is itself predetermined, is doomed to end in more of the same’
John Toon, The Black Archive #15 – Full Circle; p.67
61. ‘For the moment he would remain hidden - until the starliner was well away - then he would reveal himself’
62. ‘It was not just freedom that the Doctor offered. It was adventure. It was wonderment. It was, ultimately, a new and deeper wisdom’
63. ‘“you only came to help with the quest for the Key to Time.” A smile. “I suppose they reckon you've served your sentence now”’
64. ‘She knew that if she did she would never again be able to experience the freedom she had so much enjoyed in the company of the Doctor’
65. ‘His days as a fugitive from the Time Lords were long behind him now. “I lost my fight, Romana. Remember that”’
66. ‘Varsh had died to save their lives’
Are You Sitting Comfortably..?
‘and when he knew all these secrets, Ragen Nefred was a shocked man’
‘Whatever lay ahead for the Doctor, Romana and K9, in E-Space or beyond, Adric was now very much a part of it’
Smithisms
‘Lorenzil's last thoughts in life were that he was going to survive the crash after all’ – dripping with irony. Lovely
Actually, Smith’s good with deaths. Another favourite: ‘As you yourself, Ragen Nefred, have proved useless, he told himself. […] Nefred was well aware that he was dying, and he was sorry that he would have no opportunity to redeem himself’
Miscellania
‘burning metal screamed at a pitch which challenged the death-yells of the passengers’ – I don’t really why pitch rather than volume is the issue here. Is it like sine and cosine waves cancelling each other out?
‘Damyen Fenrik’ – did Ian Briggs read this?
Gallifrey: ‘a grey, arid desertscape stretching as far as the eye could see. In the far distance a mountain seemed to float, magically, on a carpet of grey heat-haze’
‘a short, rod-like electronic device with a miniature parabolic dish at one end - his sonic screwdriver’ – is this the first time the sonic screwdriver’s been introduced in so detailed a manner? And is it a coincidence we’re just one book after its destruction?
The Tardis’s journey through the CVE is rather nice: ‘The peculiar blue London police-box shell of the trans-dimensional TARDIS suddenly exploded, an eruption of myriad slivers of blue light racing away in all directions’
But the description of Romana’s bedroom feels a bit of a stretch: ‘The Doctor found Romana lying on her bed in her ornate quarters’ – ornate?
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‘I want this place looking like a Mark IX when I get back, Romana’ – given Andrew Smith is often hailed as the first fan-writer, what exactly is a Mark IX Tardis and how does it relate to a Type 40 or even the Monk’s Mark 4 from ‘The Time Meddler’?
Here, the gap between the Tardis’s inner and outer doors is made explicit: ‘Adric peered into the spatio-temporal void, pitch black, which lay between the TARDIS's inner and outer doors’. And it’s clearly a bit of a walk: ‘He found the external doors a few feet into the blackness’
More writer-proof K9: ‘K9 was aware that statistically there was a good possibility that he would fail to achieve his objective - his vocabulary did not include the phrase 'taking a long shot'’ and ‘“Do not be afraid,” K9 soothed’
‘this is your sort of problem. Psychopathology’ – Romana’s specialism? I suppose it sort of echoes her initial interactions with the Doctor back in ‘The Ribos Operation’
The mysterious Doctor: ‘The Doctor and Romana had become very close in the time they had known one another, and yet he remained an enigma to her’
‘Romana's head dipped lower. “Sorry.” “And don't apologise,” the Doctor barked at her. “Just try and brighten up a bit”’ – weirdly much harsher than:
ROMANA: Sorry.
DOCTOR: Oh please, don't keep apologising. Try and brighten up.
chakoteya.net/DoctorWho/18-3.htm
But then it seems he’s a harsh man: ‘Omril and the Doctor looked into each other's eyes for the briefest of moments, and in that time knew all of their loathing for one another’
Despite that, there are some lovely moments of him licking his hair: ‘Moisture from the mists had gathered on the Doctor's hair. Lifting one hand, he gently patted his hair with the palm, gathering some of that moisture on it. He looked at his palm, sniffed it, sampled some of the moisture with a minuscule lap of his tongue’ (like a big upright cat?) and ‘He again studied the flavour of the moisture from his hair’
And you’ve got to enjoy his first meeting with the Deciders: ‘It is usually a very effective psychological ploy to leave someone you wish to feel inferior standing in total darkness for a period of time. It instils in most people a sense of vulnerability and paranoia. “If you'd listened to that final reminder,” the Doctor pointed out, “and paid the bill, this never would have happened.” The Doctor was not 'most people'.’ Followed up with the revelation: ‘There was serious reasoning behind the Doctor's levity. He didn't speak merely to intimidate his unseen audience: the resonance of his voice enabled him to approximate the dimensions of the room in which he stood. It was large - very large. Always know your territory, the Doctor considered’
He also gets the lovely line: ‘Can't we go somewhere more intimate? Some little football pitch, perhaps?’
Mind you, it’s extraordinary that the Deciders’ ‘psychological ploy’ of making the Doctor wait before meeting him extends to leaving him ‘in darkness for over half an hour’
Adric is ‘an elite among Elites’
Mind you, Smith does a nice job showing that he and Varsh are taking different routes to the same end: ‘an astute observer would have noticed a common philosophical drive in the two young men - both liked to be free of strictures, to be in charge of situations. Adric had tried to satisfy this facet of his personality by working hard to establish himself academically. Varsh had taken another route by leaving the starliner’
And giving a little psychological depth to that drive they both share: ‘Adric had been a year old when their parents had been killed in the last forest fire. They had then been brought up by friends of their parents, but had never felt they could properly express themselves to anyone except each other’
Which lends Varsh’s death some added poignancy: ‘Adric knelt beside his brother, more calm now, keeping the intolerable sadness inside him, wiping his reddened eyes clear. He heard the Doctor say something. Without making out his words, he knew it was a remark of consolation, of shared remorse. Yet within him he knew no one could share the remorse he felt. Not really’
When Adric fails to steal marshfruit: ‘There was a fear in him, a cold, stabbing fear, and that fear had a name... shame’ – is that because he tried to steal? Because he failed? Because he was caught? It’s very difficult to tell
He fits right in right away: ‘“Beats a boring old scanner any day of the week, eh?” said Adric’ – they’ve even given him that Doctor-ish ‘eh?’