A quest through the Dr Who novelisations
"The excellent ham of Doctor Who is more than a little off"
1974 Times Literary Supplement review of Doctor Who and the Crusaders (quoted from David J Howe's The Target Book)
"I was probably one of the last children on Gallifrey to have genuine nightmares"
DOCTOR WHO AND THE STATE OF DECAY
by Terrance Dicks
First published 17 September 1981 (1), between Logopolis and Castrovalva (2)
Height Attack
Tarak’s a ‘tall man’, the Doctor’s a ‘Tall man with curly hair and a silly scarf’, Zargo and Camilla are ‘both tall and thin’ and, of course, the last of the great vampires is a ‘giant creature’ with a ‘giant hand’ and a ‘giant heart’ which requires a ‘giant rocket’ to defeat it
This feels like a bit of a step backwards, even in its good bits. When the Three Who Rule are described as ‘remote and alien’ (3), not ‘quite human’ (4), it feels like Doctor Who and the War Games (1979) all over again, especially in the context of being described simply as ‘the Lords’ (5). Furthermore, discussion of the ‘cold and distant’ manner of the ruling classes as what would ‘be expected (6) and their attitude to those they rule ‘as if [they] were a member of some different, inferior species’ (7) harks back to Dicks’s anti-imperial barbs that were commonplace in novelisations such as Doctor Who and the Pyramids of Mars (1976) and Doctor Who and the Mutants (1977). Remember though that the story was inevitably a bit of a step backwards itself – originally commissioned, according to Shannon Sullivan, in 1977 (8), and only dropped because of concerns it might reflect badly on a planned adaptation of Dracula (9) rather than because of any flaws in itself. This is a story designed for 1977.
Not so much a backward step and more just a problem is, as identified by the sole review of the novelisation on the Doctor Who Ratings Guide, written by Andrew Feyok, the flatness of the characterisation (10). K9 is, as ever, unbreakable, with particularly bright moments including: his ecstasy at ‘a good, complex calculation’ (11); the matter-of-fact way he states he’ll ‘go and rescue’ the Doctor and Romana (12) as soon as he has a free moment, even before there’s any evidence they’ve got into trouble; his reaction to the Doctor’s hunt for information on vampires, taken aback and unsure of the Doctor’s ‘mental balance’ (13); and the acknowledgement that he’s ‘very sensitive’ (14) and it would be best if Ivo apologise for some harsh words earlier.
The Doctor, surprisingly, proves less writer-proof. There is one lovely flourish – when the Doctor declares he ‘was probably one of the last children on Gallifrey to have genuine nightmares’ (15), it offers a tantalising glimpse of how such a sterile society produced this children’s hero, vanquisher of the monsters under the bed – and a few moments which capture the late-Baker performance – ‘babbling nonsensically’ when ‘worried’ (16) and getting ‘increasingly tactless’ when he takes a dislike to people (17), but these are almost rote character points by now – but Feyok sums it up well saying ‘it feels just like reading Tom Baker’s lines and not Tom Baker himself’ (18), which might sound strange but, when you read the book, is pretty much spot on.
In fact, it might be a little kind. There’s one scene that differs from the broadcast episodes which it’s difficult to imagine the post-Hinchcliffe Baker even approaching – maybe it got changed in rehearsal, which’d certainly explain the ersatz comic patter of the TV episode (19). The Doctor’s insistence that, should the giant vampire get free, ‘billions of lives will be lost’ and he ‘can't endanger all those lives for the sake of just one stowaway’ (20) leaves little doubt he’s willing to sacrifice Adric for the greater good.
Faring worse than the Doctor, though, is Romana. Little moments, as when she reflects her and the Doctor’s meeting with Zargo and Camilla ‘was turning out to be one of the least successful social occasions of all time’ (21) capture the distinctly home counties frame of reference of Lalla Ward’s incarnation, but Feyok’s generally right when he observes she’s ‘like a cross between the stereotypical helpless companion and Mary Tamm’s version’ (22) – certainly, the moment when the Doctor physically moves to ‘protect [a fallen Romana] as best he could’ (23) fits the former and Romana’s pointed unwillingness to be ‘outdone on points of scholarship’ (24) fits the latter. However, returning to the Doctor’s willingness to abandon Adric, it’s difficult to imagine either Romana or even Leela (25) delivering the line ‘I can't think in billions […] I can only think of Adric –’ (26). It might just about fit former, more conventional, Tardis travellers like Sarah or Jo, but it’s hard to portray the line as ‘helpless’ when it forces a parallel plan to rescue the young Alzarian. Perhaps a cross between generic companion and Mary Tamm would cover it, which would be understandable given this in only the second serial starring Lalla Ward that Dicks has adapted, and ‘Destiny of the Daleks’ had a pretty ropey approach to the character, while he’s novelised four of the Key to Time stories.
One change from the broadcast episodes, though, feels like it reflects more directly on his actual experience on ‘State of Decay’. When Romana initially pooh-poohs the Doctor’s tale of ancient giant vampires (27), it’s her clear intent to launch into extended dismissal beginning ‘Scientifically speaking’ (28) that irritates the Doctor into shutting her down more emphatically than onscreen, insisting on the validity of explaining the universe ‘poetically’. In this exchange, Dicks may be playing out his frustration with Bidmead who, according to Shannon Sullivan, kept ‘butting heads’ (29) with Dicks, ‘unhappy’ that the story didn’t adhere to ‘solid scientific concepts’ (30). The mutinous but ignored ‘Humph!’ given to Romana as the Doctor blithely ploughs on might reflect Dicks’s victory over Bidmead once director Peter Moffatt, according to Shannon Sullivan, took his side (31) and, according to Dragon Dave, pushed John Nathan-Turner to limit Bidmead’s alterations to the script (32).
Adric’s in this too.
Beyond the Tardis crew, however, there are some gleams of light. Tarak’s rescue of the Doctor and Romana gets a little more attention than on TV: he’s able to remember the guard’s routines to his advantage (33) and then pithily comments on how everyone else’s similarly brilliant memories are a hindrance (34). His death, more clearly gruesome in the novelisation (35), also feels a little less incidental. His insistence on accompanying Romana in her search for Adric, despite the Doctor’s reservations (36), not only absolves the Tardis pair of responsibility for his death, but also gives Tarak more agency in his fate, choosing to be brave; he dies a hero rather than collateral damage.
Habris, meanwhile, is the real winner. There’s a very clear sense of the dilemma he’s in, trapped between the Lords, who terrify him (37), and Ivo, who manages such crucial resources as food, seemingly for the guards as well as the villagers (38). He can’t even practice discretion in his position as mediator between castle and village because Aukon will know if he attempts to withhold anything, hence his decision to take Karl despite inspiring Ivo’s ire (40), and is indeed so frightened of Aukon that, even though it’s stated his ‘main concern was with his own survival’ (41), he follows instructions to defend the tower from the rebels (42) even as Aukon confirms it will likely mean his death (43). Despite all this, Habris is a less sympathetic figure than onscreen, taking satisfaction in terrorising his guards as the Lords terrorise him (44) and, when confronted by Ivo at the end, trying to connive one last time for his life (45) where on TV he seems much more ready to accept responsibility for his earlier actions, even if he’s also trying to excuse them (46). In this, he fits more easily the role of quisling, which might explain why Dicks decides to have him killed (47).
And that’s pretty much it. It feels a shame that the first book to wear the new 80s Who logo should both be so keen to look backwards and stumble so badly on formerly solid basics while doing so. Interestingly, though, this is also El Sandifer’s verdict on the TV serial (48) and, in this, she’s sees a recurring issue for the whole Nathan-Turner era issue emerging, so maybe this is in fact the most apt way for the books to ring in the new branding.
1. Based on the Popular Television Series, ed. Paul Smith
2. epguides.com/DoctorWho/
3. ‘It wasn't so much any quality they possessed, decided Habris, it was something they lacked. There was a sense of something remote and alien about them’
4. ‘It was as though they weren't quite human’
5. ‘What was it about the Lords, he wondered, that filled him with such unreasoning terror?’
6. ‘They were cold and distant, but no more so than to be expected of those in such a high position’
7. ‘It was the way they looked at you, as if you were a member of some different, inferior species, whose concerns were of no real interest to them’
8. ‘Originally known as “The Witch Lords”, it was commissioned as “The Vampire Mutations” on January 11th, 1977, and was planned to be the first serial of Season Fifteen’
Shannon Patrick Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/drwho/serials/5p.html
9. ‘work on “The Vampire Mutations” was abruptly halted by Head of Serials Graeme MacDonald. The BBC was planning an expensive new adaptation of Dracula, and MacDonald feared that a Doctor Who story about vampires would be construed as a send-up’
Shannon Patrick Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/drwho/serials/5p.html
10. ‘Another major flaw is his depiction of the regular characters’
Andrew Feyok, ‘Doctor Who and the Vampires’, pagefillers.com/dwrg/frames.htm
11. ‘There was nothing he liked more than a good, complex calculation’
12. ‘Their journey was dangerous and ill-advised. As soon as I have finished my calculations, I shall go and rescue them’
13. ‘K9's head swung round, and his dye screen scanned the Doctor as if checking his mental balance. “Vampires, Master?”’
14. ‘“You really think I ought to-” “Yes,” said the Doctor sternly. “He's very sensitive”’
15. ‘“I was probably one of the last children on Gallifrey to have genuine nightmares.” “That explains a great deal,” said Romana acidly’
16. ‘when the Doctor started babbling nonsensically like this it was a sign he was very worried’
17. ‘The Doctor seemed to have taken a positive dislike to his two hosts and was showing his feelings by a series of increasingly tactless remarks’
18. ‘Dicks has all of Tom Baker's lines, but it doesn't sound like Tom Baker […] it feels just like reading Tom Baker's lines and not Tom Baker himself’
Andrew Feyok, ‘Doctor Who and the Vampires’, pagefillers.com/dwrg/frames.htm
19. ROMANA: We've forgotten about Adric. He's still a prisoner somewhere. We've got to find him.
DOCTOR: Adric? Adric? Where can we start?
TARAK: Well, there is an inner sanctum. It's where nobody's allowed but the three.
DOCTOR: If that thing down there's what I think it is, and if it escaped into our universe, billions of lives would be lost. Could you take me there?
TARAK: Of course, Doctor.
DOCTOR: Come on. No, no. Romana, you take the Tardis and I'll take the inner sanctum.
ROMANA: No, you take the Tardis. I'll take the inner sanctum
chakoteya.net/DoctorWho/18-4.htm
20. ‘“Adric. He's still a prisoner here. We've got to rescue him.” “Romana, if that thing down there is what I think it is, and if it escapes into our universe, billions of lives will be lost. I can't endanger all those lives for the sake of just one stowaway.”’
21. ‘Their little chat with Lord Zargo and Lady Camilla, thought Romana, was turning out to be one of the least successful social occasions of all time’
22. ‘The Romana painted by Dicks in this story seems like a cross between the stereotypical helpless companion and Mary Tamm's version of Romana […] Without Lalla Ward to vocally change the interpretation of the lines, it comes across very much like Mary Tamm's version of Romana, constantly getting annoyed by the Doctor's clowning and using every opportunity to put him down and in his place’
Andrew Feyok, ‘Doctor Who and the Vampires’, pagefillers.com/dwrg/frames.htm
23. ‘The Doctor straightened up, and stood over Romana, preparing to protect her as best he could’
24. ‘Romana wasn't to be outdone on points of scholarship’
25. ‘Some changes were necessary, such as replacing Leela with Romana’
Shannon Patrick Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/drwho/serials/5p.html
26. ‘“I'm afraid I can't think in billions,” said Romana. “I can only think of Adric –”’
27. ‘ROMANA: Rubbish. DOCTOR: Well, he wasn't a scientist. There are other ways of looking at life, you know. Anyway’
chakoteya.net/DoctorWho/18-4.htm
28. ‘“Rubbish! Scientifically speaking-” “Well, he wasn't a scientist,” said the Doctor rather crossly. “There are other ways of looking at life, you know. Perhaps he was speaking poetically. I do wish you wouldn't keep interrupting.' Romana gave a mutinous “Humph!” “Anyway”’
29. ‘The two men found themselves butting heads as Bidmead adamantly tried to steer Dicks away from horror clichés’
Shannon Patrick Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/drwho/serials/5p.html
30. ‘he script editor was already unhappy with the storyline , which he felt ran contrary to the efforts he and Nathan-Turner were making to ground Doctor Who in solid scientific concepts’
Shannon Patrick Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/drwho/serials/5p.html
31. ‘Moffatt was eager to draw upon vampire tropes emphasised in the horror movies of Hammer Films, and he was unhappy that Bidmead was persistently amending the scripts to downplay these elements’
Shannon Patrick Sullivan, A Brief History of Time (Travel), shannonsullivan.com/drwho/serials/5p.html
32. ‘he walked into Christopher H Bidmead's office, and when he walked out, he handed Peter Moffatt a version of the script that better represented the story Moffatt had fallen in love with’
Dragon Dave, ‘John Nathan-Turner And The Sociopathic Abscess’, dragoncache.blogspot.com/2014/10/john-nathan-turner-and-sociopathetic.html
33. ‘Tarak found it easy enough to elude the patrols around the Tower. They had followed the same set routes for as long as he could remember’
34. ‘“People's memories are too good around here,” said Tarak and clubbed him with the hilt of his dagger’
35. ‘The force of the impact snapped Tarak's neck, and he rolled lifeless to the floor’
36. ‘“She won't be alone, Doctor,” said Tarak. “I'll stay here with her.” “But I've no right to ask that of you.” “You're not asking, are you?”’
37. ‘The haste was because he was on the business of the Lords, and dared not delay. The reluctance was because, as always, to enter the presence of his rulers made Habris sweat with fear’
38. ‘Habris hesitated. He and Ivo were not exactly friends, but they shared a mutual respect, based on their different kinds of authority. Besides, Ivo was responsible for the distribution of food, and he took good care to look after his friends’
39. ‘if Habris felt that Karl was suitable and did not bring him, Aukon would know […] Aukon would pluck the truth from his mind and before long the guards would have a new Captain’
40. ‘“The boy has spirit, Ivo. I'll try to get them to take him as a guard. I can promise nothing, you understand.” Still Ivo did not speak. Something about the expression on his face made Habris shiver and he turned away’
41. ‘Like everyone in the Village, Habris's main concern was with his own survival’
42. ‘Reluctant to return to the battle, but too frightened to disobey Aukon, Habris stumbled along the corridors of the Tower’
43. ‘“Then die!” snarled Aukon. “That is the purpose of guards”’
44. ‘the door guards were standing rigidly to attention, their faces filled with terror, assuming no doubt that his scowl was for them. Consoling himself with the thought that they feared him just as much as he feared the Lords’
45. ‘Habris saw a gleam of hope. “Zargo is in the caves below. I can take you to him...”’
46. IVO: This is for my son.
HABRIS: I tried to help him.
(Ivo throws away the knife and they go hand to hand.)
chakoteya.net/DoctorWho/18-4.htm
47. ‘“I shall find Zargo for myself,” said Ivo. “But first I shall deal with you!” His hands closed around Habris's throat’
48. ‘this keeps being true of the Nathan-Turner era. With maddening frequency it soars on advanced topics in television production while crashing and burning on the basic’
Elizabeth Sandifer, Tardis Eruditorum, eruditorumpress.com/blog/fish-from-space-state-of-decay
Dicksisms
Quite late on, ‘With a wheezing, groaning sound, a strange blue box appeared’, but Dicks still finds space to squeeze it in a second time: ‘There was a wheezing, groaning sound in the rebel HQ, and the TARDIS faded away’
Are You Sitting Comfortably..?
‘The Doctor pointed to the left, changed his mind and dashed up the right-hand ladder. It was a bad decision’
References I Didn’t Get
The Doctor on the wine: ‘Not unlike Bulls' Blood, I fancy’ – predictably, a red wine. From Hungary, it’s now known as Egri Bikavér (the-buyer.net/people/producer/elizabeth-gabay-egri-bikaver-bulls-blood) and, curiously, at the time of this reference, it would have been, according to Wikipedia, ‘a much lighter, simpler wine’ than today (en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Egri_Bikavér), which makes its status as the choice tipple of vampires a bit surprising
Miscellania
‘At the conclusion of a recent adventure, the TARDIS had been sucked through a kind of whirlpool in the fabric of Space/Time, and had emerged into something the Doctor called the exo-Space/Time continuum - E-Space’ – wasn’t it at the start of ‘Full Circle’?
‘It always infuriated Romana when the Doctor spoke of the TARDIS as if it was a living creature’ – doesn’t she know?
‘the sinister green twilight had receded and the Tower's ivy-covered walls were basking peacefully in the rays of the late-afternoon sun’ – twilight to late afternoon? Does time go backwards in E-space?
I quite like the handling of the Three Who Rule. Little touches like ‘Camilla glided towards the table’ set up their vampiric nature nicely and their essential characters are efficiently established: ‘Aukon was a fanatic, far more dangerous than the petulant Zargo, or the icy Camilla’. I like the way Zargo is weakly peevish (‘“Why must it always be Aukon who speaks to the Great One?” muttered Zargo peevishly’) and Camilla is explicitly ‘by far the stronger of the two’ as Zargo flannels in the face of the Doctor’s questioning. There’s also the bit where Romana and Tarak seek to rescue Adric: ‘The two had awakened in the full vampire state, eyes red and glowing, hands outstretched like hooked talons, sharp canine teeth gleaming at the corners of their mouths’
Adric’s ability to act gets further undermined: ‘It was not so much Adric's protestations of loyalty that impressed Aukon as the look of frozen horror on Romana's face’
And the Doctor’s decision to steal an antiquated Tardis actively saves the day: ‘A copy was to be installed in all time vehicles. Nobody remembered why, though, and in time the practice was discontinued. I suppose the older type of vehicles might still have one’